Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What’s your opinion?
Nowadays, many people argue that success is the best procedure to gauge smartness, However, others think it can be gauged differently. This essay strongly agrees with the suggestion that success is the superior way to measure intelligence. This essay will discuss how intelligence could help people achieve success, in addition to how smartness could assist people overcome obstacles during their successful journey.
Many studies around the world have found that if you want to reach success you have to plan well for your life and implement this plan and that is exactly what clevers do which means that there is a strong relationship between being smart and being successful. For instance, if a smart person wants to be educationally successful he is going to plan for his educational trek since he is a teenager and he will strictly execute that plan to make sure reaching his goal.
Another significant element for success is dealing Wisely with obstacles since during a success journey people may face a lot of obstacles that may deflect them from reaching success they have to know how to encounter those trammels carefully and this aligns very well with the mentality of intelligent people who always try to solve any problem they have Wisely. For example, if a clever person wants to be socially successful he will be cautious about conflicts with people by trying to do whatever he can including apologizing to people to make conflict over.
Eventually, I believe that the superior procedure to measure cleverness is success considering that the mindset of intelligent people is compatible with the reasons to be successful which is planning well for success in addition to encountering any trammels wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14590747331 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74283739977 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7820576372 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.75 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.125 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302214298096 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139728694126 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600701715064 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191896358851 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719808134277 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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