Some people think it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people assume that the benefits of relocating companies and industries from urban area to suburban region have been progressively increasing. In this essay, some merits and demerits will be addressed, coupled with my own perspective on this issue.
Regarding the advantages, in one hand, regional areas are spacious and considered lungs for many people who are affected by the pollution that is generated from factories. For example, in Egypt, in some industrial places those were surrounded by lots of houses inhibited by non-working people, pollution has gathered life of many people. Fumes released from those factories had caused a certain type of cancer that attacks plural layer around the lung.
In the other hand, a great population will relocate to rural places, therefore, the high density of inhabitance in the downtown can be reduced. Additionally, there will be a plethora of vacancies for villagers. In addition, being in rural areas aims to reduce the cost of manufacturing, such as the rent or price of buildings of the companies.
However, some workers who are insisting on staying in their large urban centers would lose their jobs. Others those relocates, would miss some means of entertainment, like cinemas, theaters, malls and shopping. Provided that, stores still remain in the city centers, eventually the transportation cost will be increased.
To sum up, there are crucial benefits and a few drawbacks for moving industries to the countryside. Personally, in my opinion, this move will make cities cleaner and healthier so I completely encourage more people to move to the suburbs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33073929961 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91616524616 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2792499252 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250453000112 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784489191596 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552451578009 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122562266855 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359797893684 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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