The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced
The illustration depicts how a material called ethanol could be obtained.
Overall, the nine steps cycle starts with photosynthesis process in plants and trees and ends with carbon dioxide emissions to be observed by the plants. That can be achieved by converting the tree chips to ethanol capsules and delivering it by vehicles which produce carbon oxide gas.
Firstly, plants and trees that grown up by consuming both sunlight and carbon dioxide are collected than transported to processing factory. At this point, it turns into small pieces called Cellulose. These substances have been treated and procced by medicinal plants to be converted into chemical liquids which contain sugars as a one of the main components.
After adding Microbes, a chemical composed is produced called Ethanol. This material is turned into probably pellets to make it more convenient for transporting. Cars, lories and plans are the main transporting method for delivering Ethanol. Despite the benefits of these machines, it causing harmful Carbon dioxide gas. Finally, that gas is an essential for plant seeding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42441860465 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74218369004 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2516570157 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8181818182 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137745267004 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061705742777 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841624371766 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103872883208 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717890487551 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.