Some people enunciate the idea that governments should take responsibility for
conducting and controlling scientific research. I totally concur with this view
because the interference of governments will have profound impacts on the
success and usefulness of it.
On the one hand, the outright control of governments over the process of carrying
out a research project is of significant benefit. Firstly, almost every research
program requires an enormous amount of effort, so the co-operation of many
governments of different countries is of necessity. For instance, in order to find
out radical solutions to global warming, both developed and developing countries
have to do research to deal with environmental problems in their own countries.
The act of only private companies or small organizations is not enough. Secondly,
only the government is capable of providing enormous financial assistance to
various research projects. If a project fails to achieve its objectives, the
government has the resources to cope up with the losses incurred.
On the other hand, the main motive of the government in conducting research is
public welfare. If a scientific project is funded and managed by private
companies, its credibility will suffer. Pharmaceutical companies, for example,
tend to provide financial support for clinical trials that bring benefits for their
marketing strategies so as to maximize their profit. Without government
control, some companies could carry out illegal research related to nuclear
weapons or unethical human experimentation, which poses a serious
threat to society.
In conclusion, I agree with the idea of putting the scientific research conducting
process under government control so that the success, accuracy and applicability
can be secured.
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 56
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town Norbiton and planned future development of the site 78
- The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
- The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80970149254 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1675456429 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7736954905 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317380245005 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109071668349 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713859731264 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766967226256 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623963979501 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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