Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the recent years, there has been a notable increase in the enrollment of students in private education. There is a debate between families who send their children to private schools should be waive from paying taxes that contribute state educational system.
First and foremost, education is very essential for everyone and it is necessary for people to build a decent life. This surged this process with the knowledge of the state educational system. The annual fees of each student in private schools are very high compared to governmental schools. In addition to, these payments include taxes. As well as the severe rate of student fee, parents cannot afford for extra taxes. For instant, in some countries in Europe, education is free and people only pay taxes every year for all the educational sectors and this gives families more support to their children because the responsibility of the public authority.
Secondly, reducing people from taxes because of private educational systems is very wrong. All the people should pay taxes in order to have a developed education for everyone. This will result in a well-educated workforce, and turns a productive inspiration in the consideration of the nation. Furthermore, all citizens should spontaneously pay taxes for the duty of their country. The money collected through taxes is used to improve their country in many fields and services.
To sum up, I believe that people who pays for private institutions should be exempt from taxes because of the high prices of education which stress lots of parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18897637795 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75430774831 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2559613843 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358463859779 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126394279396 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121500874839 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245795943976 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812150909459 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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