Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
Nowadays the out numbering of offenders people is constantly increasing .this essay will discuss the main reasons of this problem and why criminals broke the law.There are some reasons for re.offends.firstlly;
the imperfect system jail Different types of criminals are locked in prison.on the other hand they don't have much work to do in jail.so;they are free most of the time.they spend their free time do chit chat with another prisoner and exchange their information about they have done before.Moreover;the soaring crime rates they encourage others to take revenge; which increases the crime; everyone wants to make a Brawl because he wants him self to be a leader.in addition; there's no felony to follow the rules.secondally;when wrong closers realesd from prison;they face many difficultes such as society; people do not accept them and always ignore them which one of reasons to commit a crime again .in constract to;supermacy don't let them training and do activities like other people and not provide them to educate.Which also reason to commit more criminals after serving the punishment.therefor; police and government are tracking their phones and movements.consequently they agains the law.there is a plenty of corrective actions which will help prisoner to lead a good life.first of all practice traning .the government should provide them to practical work training so than they cant broken the law.they must placing his guards Because there are a lot of criminals mugging pick pocketing Burgiary. secondally; which is pivotal to change the jail system means increase the work inside because they would busy and they get less time to talk together or delinquent.more over the government should talk about the juvenile criminals who are eighteen years.they must say to parents to takes care about their teenagers to less the soaring crime rates.to recapitulate;if they get traning and proper education may lead a admirable life.but it also depends on the society should encourage this people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35443037975 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23827430053 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 158.0 20.2975951904 778% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 509.5 49.4020404114 1031% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 846.0 106.682146367 793% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 158.0 20.7667163134 761% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 58.0 7.06120827912 821% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227843012397 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167214466264 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567299796628 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165180057547 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434743893878 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 82.8 13.0946893788 632% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -97.35 50.2224549098 -194% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 66.1 11.3001002004 585% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.62 8.58950901804 182% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 65.2 10.1190380762 644% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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