There days it is very common to have people from two different generation mix in the same workplace. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this situation? Give your own opinion and include relevant example.
The growing influence of animal extinction has sparked various debates from recent past years. The issue is especially important as it affects the environment's balance and ecosystem. In this essay, I will discuss the challenges that we will have in future due to animal extinction and the absence of endangered animals.
One of the key benefits of laws being made for animal conservation is the survival of animal species for longer period of time that are near to extinct. By keeping the balance of animal species in biome, earth's environment and ecosystem will remain same and constant for longer period of time. As a result, more population of varied species would have great positive impacts on climate and natural cycles.
These laws should also be developed for people who are hunting these endangered animals just for sake of pleasure, and fun. By keeping a check and balance on hunting activities many problems can be solved at their own. Furthermore, by avoiding hunting activities, animals would feel safe and be able to grow their population with greater ease and peace. So, it is necessary to provide endangered animals especially a safe comfort zone for their living and survival.
To conclude, from my perspective, nimal lives are also as important as human lives for sustaining earth's climate and for maintaining a natural nutrients balance in ecosystem. Hence, other activities should be created for hunters to keep them involved in their skills and maintainance of animal population in wild and populated areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ill remain same and constant for longer period of time. As a result, more population of varied...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17670682731 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71976814376 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4443860877 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.046788477733 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204958167178 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020479378668 0.071462118173 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0317167467807 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146582981146 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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