Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other
government experts.
Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus
have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The prompts claim that we can usually learn much more from like-minded people whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation, and impede learning. The given claim is highly contentious because different people may have disparate positions and opinions on the given topic. Some may go for the topic, while other cannot argue with it at all. I both agree with the given statement that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we can share than whose views contradict our own. There are three reasons and examples are present to support the my positions are given in following paragraphs below.
Firstly, most of the countries are developed according to visions of a leader of that country, also a leader play crucial role in development of different field like education, transpotation, hospitality, and so on.
For instance, the president of Mohamad Mahathir in Malaysia who was regular two time prime minister of that country. Furthermore, he take the important decisions of that country for each sector like education, transpotation, hospitality, and so on, cause today's Malaysia is a development countries. If he cannot take good decisions of that fields, the country of Malaysia cannot develop. In effect, the important decisions should take the politicians and governments.
Secondly, politicians make country uplifting in direct as well as indirect way. For example, in India, the president Narendra Modhi play the important role in development in country, in today, India is include the most top 10 development countries in the world. If Narendra Modhi is not president of India, todays India is count as undevelopment countries like Nepal, Bhutan, and so on. Thus, important decisions of the countries is taken as from political leader.
In sum/conclusion, the reasons and examples presented to support the claim/position that partially agree with the given essay. The essay highlights the major policies decisions should always be left to politician and other government experts. The examples of Mohamad Matathir, Narendra Modhi are ilustrated to support the given essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...hile other cannot argue with it at all. I both agree with the given statement tha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dent of Mohamad Mahathir in Malaysia who was regular two time prime minister of t...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...nister of that country. Furthermore, he take the important decisions of that country...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...velopment in country, in today, India is include the most top 10 development coun...
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Line 6, column 204, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...lopment in country, in today, India is include the most top 10 development countries i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther government experts. The examples of Mohamad Matathir, Narendra Modhi are ilu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39104477612 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94229949338 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501492537313 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.643204694 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.235294118 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138259118727 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562785317931 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985650582968 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075631107469 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761575896708 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.