Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
In this modern and fast growing era it’s a debatable and pointing out issue that both parents should have equally emphasis to upbringing their child. some people blv that sole responsibility to growing child as like famous in most custlure that women made for home to take care of family member and raise child and men made for financial responsibility of family member. Indeed to my view both have equal contribution and responsibility to grow up their child.
Back to Old memories centuries ago, there is only sole responsibility of women to bring a child in term of day to day activity and mold according to their culture and father have to become only bread to winner to rearing a family members. Even now a day’s also same custom followed in my societies but now days this thought has been changed due to high living standard and advance world both parents should have to work to cope up with to maintain living standard and give precious facilities to their child like educating them international school, extra curriculum activities. In many cases father hold high position compare to women so for him not possible to get as much as time get women for family.
Another hand there are several advantages in children growing stages if both are qually taken care compare to those who lived with single parents., it is essential for a child to experience love and care from both father and mother to attain a good character. The idea is that the father needs to find leisure time to spend with the child and make him energetic by teaching outside sports instead of computer games. Likewise, the mother needs to take care of the behavior and should teach good morals of life. As a result, the child will become healthy physically and emotionally.
To take account of above view some people still adhere regardless of prior information but I believed that it is worth sharing their responsibilities among them to provide brighter future for their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
...lly emphasis to upbringing their child. some people blv that sole responsibility to ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ancial responsibility of family member. Indeed to my view both have equal contribution...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as much as time get women for family. Another hand there are several advantage...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ildren growing stages if both are qually taken care compare to those who lived wi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'likewise', 'so', 'still', 'as a result', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274787535411 0.247107548796 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.164305949008 0.15552993741 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0963172804533 0.0946569551029 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538243626062 0.0501201869031 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.042492917847 0.0437536398559 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101983002833 0.122223957237 83% => OK
Participles: 0.042492917847 0.0403219363162 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59948782443 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0764872521246 0.0326786765898 234% => Too many infinitives.
Particles: 0.00849858356941 0.00163938923432 518% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0679886685552 0.0861751148067 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113314447592 0.0214082191602 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0056657223796 0.0119246538136 48% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1971.0 1933.38276553 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 316.052104208 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83136094675 6.10592293882 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20519365927 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329376854599 0.37474360046 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222551928783 0.284197041944 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142433234421 0.203843217982 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0860534124629 0.137313986986 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59948782443 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.560935902166 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.4344995336 60.7401812628 101% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0911823647 68% => OK
Sentence length: 30.6363636364 20.7725350517 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0514297496 49.5273876611 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3017241379 93.4120437189 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.6522988506 15.2821509519 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.252873563218 0.594174754866 43% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01102204409 80% => OK
Readability: 52.8915565147 49.1922392462 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.60869565217 1.69127372897 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.333468150825 0.332604825255 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143295207337 0.102734651613 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0798076601275 0.0668474354756 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.654199417842 0.534917948617 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158513924418 0.148666948902 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160331843855 0.13441755203 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495283335126 0.0742828286743 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329112925817 0.324241079732 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121148943918 0.0640056729886 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21560163964 0.22793763319 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621318803179 0.0582452615562 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41883767535 58% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.88977955912 153% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.60220440882 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.493987976 95% => OK
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9