You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter
• explain your situation
• describe the problems
• say what you would like to happen
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam.
Dear Sir/Madam
My friends and i are your tenants at 72 Ajrian road, Lekki. We write to inform you of the challenges we have been facing in the house and also use this opportunity to talk about our rent.
Firstly, the roofs are leaking and as a result of constant rainfall the ceilings are spoiling because of the insects eating up the woods. This has also led to the destruction of most of our properties like books and other personal items. In light of the recent security issues around this area we're also worried as there is no front gate, wish means the house is less secure.
Secondly, we will like to ask if it is possible to invite a friend of ours to share the rent and occupy the spare bedroom to enable us share the five hundred thousand rent, since we find it quite high for us to pay. However is important to note that the light has been repaired in light of our previous complain and we hope that this repairs will be made at no extra cost.
we will be glad if the repairs are looked into and also the our request to bring in one additional person to share the spare bedroom.
we look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Esther Okoronkwo.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear Sir/Madam My friends and i are your tenants at 72 Ajrian road, Lek...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
... house is less secure. Secondly, we will like to ask if it is possible to invite...
^^^^
Line 6, column 217, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ce we find it quite high for us to pay. However is important to note that the light has...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...airs will be made at no extra cost. we will be glad if the repairs are looked ...
^^
Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...if the repairs are looked into and also the our request to bring in one additional pers...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... person to share the spare bedroom. we look forward to hearing from you. ...
^^
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Yours faithfully Esther Okoronkwo.
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206751054852 0.220444632235 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.185654008439 0.167888034529 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0717299578059 0.0606518309736 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0464135021097 0.0506257000042 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0801687763713 0.118615021944 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118143459916 0.107062808482 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0464135021097 0.041066498444 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.22669452425 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0506329113924 0.0385302599488 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0042194092827 0.00132118243153 319% => OK
Determiners: 0.101265822785 0.0714148451538 142% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126582278481 0.0191574576366 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1192.0 1141.60824742 104% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.134020619 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46788990826 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.261467889908 0.284621296913 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.178899082569 0.211203875043 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.110091743119 0.133321485273 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0504587155963 0.0843313296314 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22669452425 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.622163163488 99% => OK
Word variations: 62.2290430427 62.8969750728 99% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8 16.4300151701 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7939185619 44.7399317507 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 90.9928171075 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.4300151701 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.613754768223 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.09278350515 334% => OK
Readability: 39.6899082569 37.5504026743 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.18918918919 1.13073093955 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19088803979 0.331212695627 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105793643258 0.0927372745006 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0626697326125 0.0736520305886 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.728211559694 0.579516596996 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180625094681 0.180689518051 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892611424504 0.122183219658 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564343961143 0.0765303033291 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298103946921 0.211926503985 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.115804004899 0.0737400523855 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130912518502 0.203819188451 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390227707683 0.067151250289 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.