It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married beforethey are 30, as this is best both for individual and for society.Do you agree or disagree ?

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married beforethey are 30, as this is best both for individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree ?

To bring stability in life, marriage is the most important step need to be taken. But, the correct time to take this step is the major question arise in front of everyone. In my opinion, the best time for an individual to do marriage is before 30 which also satisfy the standards of society too.

While entering into a new phase of life through marriage, compatibility is mandatory. Growing age proportionally enhances the maturity of a person. A matured person always try to find out perfection in each aspect. It is not possible for anyone to be perfect all the time. If one is 100% perfect then he can be considered as God. In addition to this, bringing stability into life would be very difficult without compatibility. Compatibility and cooperativeness between 2 people bring a sense of emotional satisfaction between them. And, a person who is not satisfied, will always remain unstable within the life span.

Another unavoidable instance is of family planning. Marriage in early age can bring responsibilities towards the person which convince him to think about the children nurturing and upbringing like their studies, future planning etc. A person having less salary can easily improve himself by putting extraneous efforts towards work. This can prepare him to be a good and responsible person within the balanced family.

To conclude, each aspect of life should take place in life at appropriate timings. Going school at the age of 30 is not acceptable, in the same way, taking a step of doing marriage in later age is unacceptable and can never lead to happiness. Living alone is not possible and if we wanted to walk far we have to walk together.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'in addition', 'in my opinion', 'in the same way']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224358974359 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.169871794872 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0897435897436 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0544871794872 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320512820513 0.0437548338989 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0480769230769 0.0403226058552 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8891461776 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0416666666667 0.0326793684256 128% => OK
Particles: 0.00320512820513 0.00163938923432 196% => OK
Determiners: 0.0897435897436 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025641025641 0.021408717616 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00961538461538 0.011925033212 81% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1669.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 316.048096192 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91843971631 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354609929078 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265957446809 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187943262411 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113475177305 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8891461776 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 66.4122575661 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6666666667 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0480383609 49.517814964 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7222222222 127.492653851 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 42.2624113475 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.55 1.69124875643 92% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218773344906 0.332605444948 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0834505715332 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551196575203 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470721434051 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156087625783 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825245562323 0.134430193775 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581039153043 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274452434874 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0564676735656 0.0638462369009 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148374101383 0.228012699653 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459797044829 0.058150111329 79% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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