It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
The author contends that compromising one's own beliefs with others is harmful compared to sticking to his or her beliefs. However, the following essay will argue that adhereing to one's idea is an act to evade, and contend that it is possible to disagree with the author's statement.
One might argue that attuning one's thinking with others is an act that is not recommended, and rather stay with one's belief. When compromising with the counterparts, each beliefs will have less convincing power than the times when each contended their belief strongly. Since both have to relinquish some parts of what they believe is the best, the compromised belief will be less attractive to initiate. Then, the belief will be reluctant to be held in reality since it is the outcome of what the people in the hassle did not aim for at first. Therefore, generally speaking, some could say that compromising their beliefs is harmful, and rather should stick to one's belief.
However, having an hassle with the counterpart and compromising each beliefs does give better outcome compared to being a maverick, not wanting to change one's idea. One can easily become a narrow-minded person if he or she only thinks about what they have been aiming for. That person could realize that there are more opportunities out there, which could be better than one's belief when talking with what others have in mind..
Moreover, sticking to one's belief delays the time to determine the choices that the people regarding the case have made. When each does not try to amend their beliefs. think about what others have in mind, there will be no end to the case. Thus, there are cases where people should make imediate chocies. For instance, there is a case of ferry Sewol. To make long story short, the ferry submerged into the sea with lots of students and teachers. However, at the very first moment, when someone reported this case to the upper figuratives, they had an hassel over which is better. SInce each had been sticking to one's beliefs, they lost the opportunity to save all. Thus, compromising gives better results than sticking to one's belief, not wanting to change.
In summary, I believe that adhering to one's belief is more harmful than compromising with counterparts since adhering to one's belief loses one's opportunity for other, could-be, better ways, and delays the time for deciding over the issue.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: However, the following essay will argue that adhereing to one's idea is an act to evade, and contend that it is possible to disagree with the author's statement.
Error: adhereing Suggestion: adhering
Sentence: Thus, there are cases where people should make imediate chocies.
Error: imediate Suggestion: mediate
Error: chocies Suggestion: choices
Sentence: However, at the very first moment, when someone reported this case to the upper figuratives, they had an hassel over which is better.
Error: hassel Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: figuratives Suggestion: No alternate word
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arguments: OK
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flaws:
No. of Words: 404 while No. of Different Words: 186
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 404 350
No. of Characters: 1943 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.483 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.809 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.384 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.263 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.656 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.535 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...wing essay will argue that adhereing to ones idea is an act to evade, and contend th...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...hat it is possible to disagree with the authors statement. One might argue that att...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ment. One might argue that attuning ones thinking with others is an act that is ...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s not recommended, and rather stay with ones belief. When compromising with the coun...
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Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... is harmful, and rather should stick to ones belief. However, having an hassle w...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ick to ones belief. However, having an hassle with the counterpart and comprom...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...being a maverick, not wanting to change ones idea. One can easily become a narrow-mi...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s out there, which could be better than ones belief when talking with what others ha...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...en talking with what others have in mind.. Moreover, sticking to ones belief d...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ave in mind.. Moreover, sticking to ones belief delays the time to determine the...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he people regarding the case have made. When each does not try to amend their belief...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Think
...ch does not try to amend their beliefs. think about what others have in mind, there w...
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Line 7, column 549, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...case to the upper figuratives, they had an hassel over which is better. SInce each...
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Line 7, column 613, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...better. SInce each had been sticking to ones beliefs, they lost the opportunity to s...
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Line 7, column 723, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...g gives better results than sticking to ones belief, not wanting to change. In s...
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Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... In summary, I believe that adhering to ones belief is more harmful than compromisin...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ing with counterparts since adhering to ones belief loses ones opportunity for other...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...rts since adhering to ones belief loses ones opportunity for other, could-be, better...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208888888889 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.215555555556 0.157235817809 137% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0511111111111 0.0880659088768 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0511111111111 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0311111111111 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104444444444 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0733333333333 0.0406280797675 180% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.47983115209 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0511111111111 0.030933414821 165% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0955555555556 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266666666667 0.0249443105267 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0311111111111 0.0148568991511 209% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2397.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 404.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93316831683 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329207920792 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220297029703 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155940594059 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0915841584158 0.132149295362 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47983115209 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 51.3574372118 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5071904303 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.85 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.21349557522 345% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.2297029703 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.29850746269 1.64882698954 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309851023524 0.391690518653 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129055372785 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0924746143738 0.077325440228 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517808775835 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190116317658 0.149214159877 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136190910419 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889377386757 0.0892212321368 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380282471873 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0497967846696 0.0692045440612 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22972768275 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773257915198 0.0653680567796 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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