It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is not uncommon for someone to argue that compromising one's beliefs is worse than adhering to them. Proponents of this view would argue that if no one insist on his or her own idea, who will support the thought? Yet within that statement lies a contradiction that undermines this kind of thinking. What if this insistence disobeys the regulation of nature? In fact, I think sometimes it is better to compromise than stick to the belief.
We all know that it probably difficult for us to succeed in a short term. During our process to find the truth, we may face with a lot of challenge. For example, when we establish a new theory toward a problem, which is against the conventional views. In that case, we would receive many criticism . However, we should reflect these questions on our outcomes and try to improve the established thought instead of relinquishing what we have down. If we finally compromise our own belief, we may lose the chance to make great contribution.
However, the situation above needs a premise that we would insist on the correct alternatives. If we are doing something dangerous, it is clever to quit rather than adhere to do so. For example, if we are cheated in a crime team and we are immersed in the voraciousness of making more money, what we believe is harmful to the harmony in whole society. At this time, if someone stops us from criminal action, trying to evoke us. We shouldn't insist on what we believe is ingenious and are supposed to listen to the advice in morality.
What's more, it brings another question is that sometimes we could't distinguish what we adhere is right or not. So it becomes ambiguous to decide whether we should compromise or not. It is even harder for kids and the elder to know what they should trust, and they are vulnerable to be disguised and believe something implausible. Under this circumstance, it is the parents' and offspring responsibility to take care of their family member. Only in this way can they be protected from the bad guys.
In conclusion, I disagree with the judgement that compromising is less beneficial than adhering to the belief. I hold the view that it should be according to the circumstance.（
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... for someone to argue that compromising ones beliefs is worse than adhering to them....
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'think'.
Suggestion: sometimes think
...ys the regulation of nature? In fact, I think sometimes it is better to compromise than stick t...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun criticism seems to be countable; consider using: 'many criticisms'.
Suggestion: many criticisms
...l views. In that case, we would receive many criticism . However, we should reflect these ques...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at case, we would receive many criticism . However, we should reflect these questi...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...criminal action, trying to evoke us. We shouldnt insist on what we believe is ingenious ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...to listen to the advice in morality. Whats more, it brings another question is tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7545691906 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8409906771 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543080939948 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5030035958 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.1739130435 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.652173913 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134975454153 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045226573803 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572594330664 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922922184381 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501334122647 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.