news related topic
Here author is arguing about time allocation for diffferent type of news at late night and mentioning about complaints at last year for more time given to national
news and less to weather amd local news.So in order to satisfy customer by demand channel should devote time for different news as its former level.
There are some serious flaws in this argument. Firstly author is giving casual relation about fix time allocation for weather and local news and national news.
News is something that will allow you to know about recent upheval, may be at local or national level, regarding to weather or plitical or general issue.And to
make us aware of all this, news channel is commited for true information as fast as possible.
News channel is not any type of reality show in which content will be fixed always.Sometime news related to weather will weigh or sometime, at time of cataclysm in
nation, news related to politic will weigh more.So it is not plausibe to decide time period for particular type of news.
Secondly always people of local area are more prone to local news rather than national news and accordingly TRP and advertise of news will get affect.So if people
are wathing more local news, then ravenues from adverties are likely to be more.And it is not always necessary that,there will be fix advertisers to give contracts.
TRP of news channel is always function of veracity of news and speed of news dissimination. And other variable like type of news and time allocation of that, is
tentative.So to take any perpetual decision based on tentavive variable is not plausible.in conclusion i would add that balance of time allocation and revanues
is more figurative and need some analysis to come at any firm decision that can benefit channe.
- young people should be encouraged to pursue long term realistic goal rather than seek immediate fame and recognition 16
- law should be flexible enough to take account of various circusmtances , times , and places 16
- an innovative treatment has come to our attention that promices to significantly reduce absenteeeism inour school andworkplace. a study reports that in nearby east meria, whwre fish consumption is very high, people visit once or twice fortreatment of cold 41
- govermnment oficials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out will of the people they serve 50
- competition for high grades seriously limiting the quality of learning at all levels of education. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ast year for more time given to national news and less to weather amd local news....
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...news and less to weather amd local news.So in order to satisfy customer by demand ...
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...ws and national news. News is something that will allow you to know about recent...
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...to weather or plitical or general issue.And to make us aware of all this, news ch...
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...w in which content will be fixed always.Sometime news related to weather will weigh or s...
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...igh or sometime, at time of cataclysm in nation, news related to politic will wei...
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...news. Secondly always people of local area are more prone to local news rathe...
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...local area are more prone to local news rather than national news and accordingl...
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...P and advertise of news will get affect.So if people are wathing more local news...
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...ise of news will get affect.So if people are wathing more local news, then ravenu...
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... of news and time allocation of that, is tentative.So to take any perpetual decis...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277602523659 0.25644967241 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.157728706625 0.15541462614 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.141955835962 0.0836205057962 170% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504731861199 0.0520304965353 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0157728706625 0.0272364105082 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135646687697 0.125424944231 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0347003154574 0.0416121511921 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6069373261 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0441640378549 0.026700313972 165% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0283911671924 0.113004496875 25% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0315457413249 0.0255425247493 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00946372239748 0.0127820249294 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1787.0 2731.13054187 65% => OK
No of words: 300.0 446.07635468 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95666666667 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.57801047555 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33 0.378187486979 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263333333333 0.287650121315 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18 0.208842608468 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11 0.135150697306 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6069373261 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 207.018472906 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.469332199767 112% => OK
Word variations: 53.5401470475 52.1807786196 103% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.039408867 40% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 37.5 23.2022227129 162% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.514068675 57.7814097925 191% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.375 141.986410481 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 23.2022227129 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 0.724660767414 190% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 5.14285714286 233% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 3.58251231527 586% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 63.8333333333 51.9672348444 123% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.8405768891 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200153858123 0.441005458295 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.178857706783 0.135418324435 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.11197345962 0.0829849096947 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.918378301942 0.58762219726 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164265607137 0.147661913831 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116015914164 0.193483328276 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700682631776 0.0970749176394 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.191798178231 0.42659136922 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0804614331574 0.0774707102158 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102263949313 0.312017818177 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701637922577 0.0698173142475 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 14.657635468 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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