In the modern world people started moving around the world whenever and wherever they want to go due to technological advancement. Moving around within the country and out of the country has it owns advantages and the disadvantages, among these I would like agree the point which states that travelling within country is more benefits than other countries.
Firstly, when we are inside the country everyone of us speaks same language that could be more comfortable for a person rather than speaking new language. For example, most of the Indians talks Hindi everywhere in this country so that could be more easy for someone moves around the country and to communicate others whereas the person moving to other country more often faces the language problems that is not cool.
Secondly, people habituated to the certain food habits, for example Tamilians used to eat only rice stuff but they cannot find the same stuff in other countries that will troubles them lots while they are out of countries. Because, we cannot expect the same food which we already adjusted to it, for example, finding out the rice in china is very difficult job.
Thirdly, regarding dressing sense here we are familiar with pants, shirts and gowns. But, in certain countries like Saudi Arabia we cannot wear the dresses as we like specially the female because according to their customs and the norms only female should wear only certain clothes even though they are coming from some other countries that hurts sometimes when we are foreign countries.
Fourthly, speech freedom is very less when we are in other countries. In India everyone has the fundamental rights to speech in public whereas as a foreigner we cannot talk freely in front of the public places, for example, we cannot argue anything in the public when someone there in Pakistan because of military ruling.
Finally, weather could be not suitable for us because we are well adapted to our climate and environmental conditions. For example, we are Indians used to live in the hot weather conditions, suddenly, if we are exposed to cold weather that will more discomfort for us. Instead of living in our country if we are going to Alaska then will be harsh weather for us due to the cold.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221686746988 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.144578313253 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0819277108434 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0843373493976 0.046263068375 182% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0698795180723 0.0685040099705 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134939759036 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0361445783133 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45415210473 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.033734939759 0.0309702414327 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00240963855422 0.00188951952338 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.0698795180723 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0313253012048 0.0209618222197 149% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0289156626506 0.0139019557991 208% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2239.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 379.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90765171504 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366754617414 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255936675462 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150395778364 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0844327176781 0.112833075102 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45415210473 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503957783641 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 54.3611840069 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 29.1538461538 20.5533526081 142% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8941205698 48.84282405 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.230769231 120.699889404 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.5533526081 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 0.644075263715 191% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 54.7475137 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.31451612903 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222189471728 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.185029811922 0.103427244359 179% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107886854152 0.0752933317313 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.725661961493 0.497263757937 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149904073937 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10367876567 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422315647031 0.0781384742642 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.292038792586 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0502495490762 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140038642066 0.210909579961 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333431609372 0.0618886996521 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.