TPO 40
Addressing the issue of landing human being on the surface of Venus, the passage brings up three different obstacles on the way of this plan. The lecturer, on the other hand, sates that by floating on the Venus's atmosphere rather than its surface, around 50 kilometers above of the surface, all of these mentioned problems would easily solve.
The first problem the reading discusses is the high pressure of the Venus's surface which is actually 90 times bigger than earth's pressure, and it means every single object landing on it will practically crash. The professor remarks that due to the physical law of pressure which says by increasing the altitude, the pressure decreases, the pressure in the station, near 50 kilometers above the surface, is exactly equal to the earth's pressure suitable and tolerable for all objects including human being.
Since there is neither sources of water on Venus, nor are there water vapor and oxygen in its atmosphere, its atmospheric components including carbon dioxide, sulfuric acid, and nitrogen, the reading points out the lack of enough water and oxygen causes that instituting a permanent station seems impossible. The professor, however, explains that there are some chemical procedures and reactions making it possible to produce oxygen from carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid presenting in the atmosphere, which in turn would result in production of water.
Although the lecturer confirms the reading's discussed fact that the high percentage, around 60, of sun light are reflected from the thick clouds of Venus, he believes that on the floating station it would not make any problems. Because the station's location lets its residents to access more than 40 percent of sun light reaching to the surface; in addition to this direct solar energy, they are able to collect the reflected sun rays. Thus, spacemen have sufficient solar energy to produce electricity and use it in their technical staffs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t landing on it will practically crash. The professor remarks that due to the physi...
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Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are neither sources'?
Suggestion: there are neither sources
... objects including human being. Since there is neither sources of water on Venus, nor are there water ...
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Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...ould not make any problems. Because the stations location lets its residents to access m...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264367816092 0.261695866417 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.126436781609 0.158904122519 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0919540229885 0.0723426182421 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287356321839 0.0435111971325 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0344827586207 0.0277247811725 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135057471264 0.128828473217 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0459770114943 0.0370669169778 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57382604285 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0229885057471 0.0208969081088 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00574712643678 0.00154638098197 372% => OK
Determiners: 0.120689655172 0.128158765124 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114942528736 0.0158828679856 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014367816092 0.0114777025283 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1949.0 1645.83664459 118% => OK
No of words: 315.0 271.125827815 116% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1873015873 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.04852973271 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409523809524 0.374372842146 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304761904762 0.287516216867 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.231746031746 0.187439937562 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126984126984 0.113142543107 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57382604285 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.539623497131 106% => OK
Word variations: 62.5570769911 53.8517498576 116% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 21.7502111507 161% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7618301239 49.3711431718 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 216.555555556 132.220823453 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 21.7502111507 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.878197800319 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 65.4761904762 50.5018328374 130% => OK
Elegance: 2.34848484848 1.90840788429 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.690846036643 0.549887131256 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.243015835698 0.142949733639 170% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0883401562645 0.0787303798458 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.749679460251 0.631733273073 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161706866302 0.139662658121 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.370509786412 0.266732575781 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114153802407 0.103435571967 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.356870399633 0.414875509568 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10156985912 0.0530846634433 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.496175115417 0.40443939384 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301953644049 0.0528353158467 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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