Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Whether children should be educated to be good citizens by parents or schools has become an ongoing debate in the public. In my view, I think both parents and schools have responsibilities to make sure children are well cultivated on the right track.
It is undeniable that, parents play a critical role in their children’s lives because they spend the most of the time staying with their children, which gives them plenty of opportunities to find out and regulate the behaviour of their children. Parents who have decent and reputable manner in society play as example of good citizens for children to imitate. For instance, children are more likely to obey traffic rules if their parents do so. Meanwhile, children tend to be more cooperative with their parents who cultivate them with care and love, which leads to a smoother education experience.
On the other hand, schools also provide a platform for children to learn and develop their personalities. Not only basic knowledge is introduced during the class but also how to be a mentally healthy person in society is taught in children’s schooling time. Moreover, living with peers in schools might be the best practice for children to improve their social and communication skills, which keeps them to think how to well adapt to the society. By taking part in various interactions, children learn how to respect each other and be more cooperative.
To sum up, although parents play a pivotal role in educating their children to be adaptive to social morality, the influence from schools also should not be ignored. Thus, in order to be a good citizen in society, efforts from both parents and schools are needed.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in my view', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242038216561 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.171974522293 0.155533422707 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0764331210191 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541401273885 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0477707006369 0.0437548338989 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111464968153 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0382165605096 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8036760672 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0573248407643 0.0326793684256 175% => OK
Particles: 0.00636942675159 0.00163938923432 389% => OK
Determiners: 0.0636942675159 0.0861772015684 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00955414012739 0.021408717616 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0254777070064 0.011925033212 214% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1691.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03928571429 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360714285714 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303571428571 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182142857143 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0964285714286 0.137316102897 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8036760672 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.3066113441 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3333333333 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7415417208 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.916666667 127.492653851 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 0.814263465372 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 53.6904761905 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.43023255814 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350886786876 0.332605444948 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115633775055 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0409814306562 0.0668466124924 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.637359869543 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107746525404 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169907796362 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362102410661 0.0742795772207 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383302579232 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.064425856521 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250366005546 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204897039104 0.058150111329 35% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.