Human brain is like a machine which runs continuously in both positive and negative sense. Positive relates something which is productive and effective whereas negatives leads to ideal condition. People should give proper loading to the brain and body. Sometime machine fails due to overload similarly brain stops working due to immense pressure. Working three days a week for long hours put body in an overload situation and then other half leads to ideal condition. According to my point of view people should work five days a week for shorter hours is better than three days a week.
Continuity in working with enhance efficiency and more productive in compare to discrete work. It is always better to engage with the work so that you can know what is happening. Break of four days make body lethargic and ideal, it is very difficult to work again on the fifth day. Half of the day make your body to resume your workaholic speed. Work less in a day gives proper time for your body and brain to rest and this helps in boosting the efficiency. Is it possible to sustain with having food only for three days and no food for the rest of the days in a week? We need proper nourishment everyday to make body functions. Similarly it is better to work in continuous way neither too aggressive nor too lenient. Remaining hours can be utilized in personal things.Will it be good to give time to your family in packets? Stretching for three days will create scenario where people does not give proper time to the family. There is always fighting and frustration for those three days. There is a fact that people spends more when they are ideal.
Some people thinks that three days a week policy gives time for them to utilize rest two days in other work. They do part time jobs to enhance financial support. In this case, money comes into the picture. Everyone is working for money. No one can deny to earn more money whether to work hard or stretch a lot. Doing part time job to earn money is not bad option in compare to sitting ideal and spending money.
Finally, it depends on the purpose where people utilize remaining two days. If it is in positive cause then three days a week is the good option but other way makes body weak and lethargic. People should divide work and maintain proper routine so that their body function effectively and efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s in a week? We need proper nourishment everyday to make body functions. Similarly it is...
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Line 2, column 629, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...shment everyday to make body functions. Similarly it is better to work in continuous way ...
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Line 2, column 769, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Will
...ours can be utilized in personal things.Will it be good to give time to your family ...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ze rest two days in other work. They do part time jobs to enhance financial support. In t...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny earning'.
Suggestion: deny earning
...eryone is working for money. No one can deny to earn more money whether to work hard or stre...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...er to work hard or stretch a lot. Doing part time job to earn money is not bad option in ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'whereas']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267857142857 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.171875 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0915178571429 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0513392857143 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0401785714286 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0915178571429 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0334821428571 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33485959582 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0513392857143 0.0309702414327 166% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0647321428571 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015625 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133928571429 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2351.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 418.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62440191388 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287081339713 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198564593301 0.251872472559 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136363636364 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0789473684211 0.112833075102 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33485959582 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480861244019 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.7118777591 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4814814815 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7086729413 48.84282405 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0740740741 120.699889404 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4814814815 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.259259259259 0.644075263715 40% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 35.3379408116 45.7405998639 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.49152542373 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34501750963 0.300154397459 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118361812079 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0765900381776 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.43243490635 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109447001276 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113355924376 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773175781686 0.0781384742642 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349166650564 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.13105400309 0.067059652881 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225999087779 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546582317987 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.