It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue the building new restaurant in our neighborhood, some people believe that this plan have numerous positive effects on local people’s life. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that a new restaurant makes life more comfortable. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. I am working in a electronic company as a manager and most time I have to e in the office all day long. So it is quite normal that I have not enough time for cooking. A restaurant not only helps me to save time for important things but also offers a wide range of delicious foods. In this way, a restaurant eliminates the hustle for standing front of stove for making meals.
A further point we must consider is that a new restaurant can increase job opportunities. Because of economic recession, most people specially youth lose their job, so we need more occupation to keep them busy and out of troubles. In fact, building a new restaurant means they need some staffs, manager, and chefs. In addition, many people will are going to our neighborhood, which have significant impacts on regional business. Local government can acquire more revenue by increasing tax and spend in commercial activities and make new career. So, we need more like business that are willing to hire local people.
Apart from all points I made above, a new restaurant can be a good place for us to meet our friends. Indeed, I am living a small town and we have not access any recreational places like Movie Theater, night club, and concert hall. Hence, I have to always invite my friend to my home for meeting and speaking, while it is boring and we need new place. Building a new restaurant allows me to invite my friends to go to there and while we are eating or drinking, we can speak about daily objects.
In contrast, we can not ignore this matter that, increase population can intensify the traffic problems. However, local government can solve this predicaments by improve infrastructure like roads, public transportation as well as building new parking.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that building new restaurant boosts up economical business, makes more job opportunities and people comfortable. Of course, as an English proverb goes ‘a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take those opposite view are partly reasonable that this plan may intensify traffic problem. Nevertheless, I think that its benefits outweigh dangerous. Last but not least, I hope that people gain the deeper insight that we need to move forward and welcome new business in our neighborhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'accessed'.
Suggestion: accessed
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tation as well as building new parking. All above evidence supports this undenia...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'of course', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232774674115 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.147113594041 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12104283054 0.0866891130778 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0502793296089 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0689013035382 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100558659218 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0223463687151 0.0351676179071 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79493963331 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024208566108 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.00186219739292 0.00188951952338 99% => OK
Determiners: 0.0800744878957 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204841713222 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00744878957169 0.0139019557991 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2790.0 2387.08602151 117% => OK
No of words: 472.0 408.028673835 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91101694915 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338983050847 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254237288136 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184322033898 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116525423729 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79493963331 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552966101695 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 67.0162364462 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1538461538 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5304412933 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.730769230769 0.644075263715 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 43.5775749674 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.33566433566 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221548067005 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.071897393041 0.103427244359 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.065912700443 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468559902257 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11868388045 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708112662266 0.114077575197 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037207252654 0.0781384742642 48% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.220530678237 0.336927656856 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0769895735947 0.067059652881 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128406206818 0.210909579961 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03194050819 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.