TPO 03 - Question 1
| Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-02-12 | donya goodarz | 50.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-08-30 | mehrnazsadr | 83.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2016-10-15 | SheLaya | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2016-12-02 | JohnNYC | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-10-29 | Pauline_Bkr | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
- 2671 describe a friend who you haven't seen in yearsyou should saywhere you first met themwhy you were friends with themwhat you think they're doing nowand expalin why you haven't seen them recently 70
- 1255 Describe a person who became your intimate friend at the first meetingYou should sayWho the person wasWhen you first met the personWhat you did togetherAnd explain why you became friends at the meeting 80
- 542 describe a piece of advice you recently receivedwhen this happenedwho gave you the advicewhat the advice wasand explain how you felt about the advice 80
- 380 how do you usually spend your holidays? 70
- 2164 when and how much leisure time do you generally have in a week? 80
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.