TPO 03 - Question 1
| Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
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| 2016-11-22 | EugeneDubinchuk | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2017-02-12 | donya goodarz | 50.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2016-09-09 | confidenceking | Check this speaking | |
| 2016-11-21 | EugeneDubinchuk | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-10-17 | dinesh1997 | 90.00 | Check this speaking |
- 2228 truth the important historic placewhat is the placewhere is it locatedwhy do you think it is important 80
- 210 describe something you don't have how but would really like to own in the future.you should say-what this thing ishow long you have wanted to own itwhere you first saw itand explain why you would like to own it 70
- TPO 30 - Question 2Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should be involved in the process of helping their children to choose a career. Use specific examples and details to support your opinion. 70
- 1605 who do you spend most time talking to on the telephone? 80
- 1929 which other language have you studied? 70
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.