TPO 03 - Question 1
| Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-28 | Mennatallah | 90.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2016-11-22 | EugeneDubinchuk | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2017-09-19 | mojtaba_aam | 90.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-08-24 | prem123 | 83.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-08-30 | mehrnazsadr | 83.00 | Check this speaking |
- 284 when you visit other places, do you take photos or buy postcards? 80
- which skill should children learn at school? 60
- Describe a shop near where you live that you sometimes use you should say what sorts of product it sells what the shop looks like where it is located and explain why you use this shop 38
- 1929 which other language have you studied? 70
- 709 describe a sport you would like to learn you should say what it is what equipment is needed for it how you would learn it and explain why you would like to learn this sport 57
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.