TPO 03 - Question 1
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- TPO 48 Question 5 67
- 1203 Describe a job you would like to do in the futureYou should sayWhat the job would beWhat you would do in that jobHow you can get the jobAnd explain why you would like to do that job 70
- 1836 Describe a show or performance that you enjoyed watching You should say What kind of performance it was When and where you saw it Who you saw it with Who the performers were And explain why you attended this performance 60
- 216 are there any benefits to society of people wanting to get new possessions 70
- TPO 44 - Question 5 80
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oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.