TPO 03 - Question 1
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- 855 second describe a place with animalsyou should saywhere it ishow you heard of itwhat animals can be seenand explain why it might be an interesting place to visit. 70
- 503 which groups of people generally need most support in a community? why? 80
- 1755 what are the main differences between music today and that of previous decades? 70
- TPO 32 - Question 3 70
- Some people say that successful athletes are born with their talent, while others say thattheir success comes only through hard work Explain which of these statements you agreewith and why. Include details and examples in your explanation. 70
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oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.