TPO 03 - Question 1
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| 2018-10-29 | Pauline_Bkr | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-04-05 | dadfarfardad361 | 50.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-08-15 | silvio deusdara | 66.00 | Check this speaking |
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- 2138 describe a friend who is important you you should say the name of your friend when and where you met this friend what kinds of things you and this friend like to do together and explain why this friend is important to you 70
- TPO 43-4 80
- 755 first should education encourage students to have their own new ideas? why? 70
- 290 what jobs can be affected by different weather conditions 57
- Some people believe that same-sex schools are more effective, whereas otherpeople believe that schools with both boys and girls are better. Which approach doyou think is better and why? Include details and examples to support yourexplanation. 70
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oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.