The first pie graph shows, distribution of energy utilization among 7 main categories in Australian residencies, while the second pie graph depicts contribution of those 7 main categories on greenhouse gas emissions. Overall, vast majority of energy is used for heating purposes, either house or water, and water heating was the major group that causes greenhouse gas emissions.
Heating of the house was the major category with of 42% of energy utilization, which was followed by water heating with 30%. Less than 10% of energy was used for refrigerators, and lighting, with 7% of former and 4% for the latter one. Interestingly only 2% of energy was used for cooling. There were other appliances which consumed 15% of energy.
Coming up to the greenhouse gas emission rates, we can see that water heating was responsible of 32% of greenhouse gas emissions. Other appliances, were the second largest group with 28%. Strikingly, cooling which constitute only 2% of energy utilization, caused 14% of greenhouse gas emissions. Lighting and cooling were two groups which produced 8% and 3% of greenhouse gas emissions respectively.
- Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? 59
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 71
- The take below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. 56
- It is better to eat food which is produced locally by small farmers, rather than food produced by ‘factory farming’ and transported long distances.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 51
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2817679558 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99328226429 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2862299212 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234004174541 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103162875263 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425789095916 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166240863732 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195764562657 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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