Essay topics:
Some people think there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want.
One the one hand, there are some reasons why some people want to make noise as they like. Firstly, many people feel more comfortable and relax when they creating noise while working or entertaining. For example, my younger sister often listens to music with loud volume, which can help her relieving stress after hard studying and working time. Secondly, people often consider noise as a part of industrialization and modernization process, therefore it is unavoidable. Traffic noise becomes more closely with urban citizens. As a result, they feel that there are no particular reasons to limit noise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to relieve' or 'relieve'.
Suggestion: to relieve; relieve
...ic with loud volume, which can help her relieving stress after hard studying and working ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 505.0 1615.20841683 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 97.0 315.596192385 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20618556701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.13828899271 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78781643973 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 176.041082164 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.752577319588 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 162.0 506.74238477 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0924501421 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233823155892 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109482978817 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102780127935 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233823155892 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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