Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that it is not neccessary for everyone to eat meat to become healthly. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.
Firstly, there are many problems will occur if people do not eat meat. For instance, people will lack some essential nutrients that having in meat like iron or vitamin B12. This deficiency state can lead to some serious diseases such as anaemia due to lack of iron and this has negative effects on human health. In addition, if people eliminate animal foods from their diet, they may not have enough energy to work because meat is one of the mai sources providing energy for body. Vegestables cannot supply calories for body to function so that do not eating enough meat will make people lethargy, faitigue and work inefficiently.
Secondly, not everyone is suitable with the vegetarian diet. Pregnant women, for example, are those who need extra nutrients and calories to notorious the fetus, so that they need to have a balance and nutritious diet. Such that diet must have all groups of food, including meat. For this reasons above, becoming a vegeterian should be an option for people, depending on their need and eating habits.
In conclusion, I believe that to have a healthly diet, people should eat variety of foods, including both vegestables and meat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94570135747 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49935189486 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8243909589 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0833333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334595698092 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122803812574 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055682049292 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19942254071 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409276239669 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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