You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir,
Good day! I am Maria Judith Parayno, 23 years old. I live at Town and Country hills, Inarawan, Antipolo City, Philippines. I am now working as a Senior Manager at San Miguel Corporation. here in the Philippines. I wrote this letter because I just travelled last week from Japan to Philippines and suddenly my suitcase was lost. Until now, I have not hears anything anout my things from your airline company.
Here is what happen, from Haneda, Japan airport, I actually have a total of one hand bag and two suitcase color brown and black. After I checked in, at exactly 8 o'clock pm dated March 25th of 2017, our flight got called and ready to go. After five hours, we arrived at NAIA 2, Philippines and unfortunately after I checked out one of my suitcase was lost. Which is the color black. I have an important documents on that suitcase like my birth certificate, training certificates, diploma and paper works, that is really important to me as a Senior Manager in our company.
Along with this, I really wanted to know what will be the things that your company needs to do about my lost suitcase. Furthermore, I want your company to investigate all the possibilities why I lost my suitcase.
This is really important to me, hope you understand and also hope things turn out fine.
Sincerely yours,
Maria Judith Parayno
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., Inarawan, Antipolo City, Philippines. I am now working as a Senior Manager at S...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...nior Manager at San Miguel Corporation. here in the Philippines. I wrote this letter...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...black. After I checked in, at exactly 8 oclock pm dated March 25th of 2017, our flight...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hecked out one of my suitcase was lost. Which is the color black. I have an important...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'document'?
Suggestion: document
...is the color black. I have an important documents on that suitcase like my birth certific...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75319148936 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67644352305 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625531914894 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0356462488 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234341077038 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061786975053 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650804933284 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121310921268 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390435784734 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.