You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline and explain what happened. describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. find out what they are going to do abou

Essay topics:

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.

Write to the airline and explain what happened. describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. find out what they are going to do about it.

I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately, I have lost my precious suitcase during my travelling. I was travelled from Ahmedabad to Delhi for business purpose on 26th june. I came to know about my valuable suitcase after reaching at Delhi. My flight number is MHO567 and My seat number is K0573.

It would be my pleasure, If you could find it as soon as possible because as you know that i came to Delhi for my business work. Although i have informed Mr. Sharma who is the charge of luggage claim office regarding this issue and he promised me to call back me within 24 hours but till yet i have not received any call. Therefore, I am writing this letter to you. I have reached at Delhi at around 8:30 PM on the same date which I have mentioned above.

My suitcase is in red color with black color handle on it and brand of my suitcase is SAGI. There are many essential documents in it such as my presentation reports, my Id proofs, some souvenirs of my kith and kins and my newly purchased clothes. I hope you would assist me by returning my suitcase.

It would be a great time when you call me for talking my bag return. I am waiting for your warm reply.

yours faithfully,

Harshida Patel

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...elhi for business purpose on 26th june. I came to know about my valuable suitcase...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on as possible because as you know that i came to Delhi for my business work. Alt...
^
Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... it such as my presentation reports, my Id proofs, some souvenirs of my kith and k...
^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... I am waiting for your warm reply. yours faithfully, Harshida Patel
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, therefore, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41850220264 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48664269175 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.290276922 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6428571429 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12252610901 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540279309079 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319469415256 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779293510475 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244437819429 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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