Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize
When it comes to the issue that it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organized today because of the complex life, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the modern complex life requires from the young people to be highly organized because of many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the people should be able to organize and plan wisely. The life today is very hard so, the people need to work long hour during a day in order to earn enough money for their families. If the person put a plan for his day by managing his time, he will be able to enjoy his life by providing enough time for himself. Eventually, he will be more satisfied and that has great consequences in his life. However, withy unplan day’s schedule, the person will waste his time before completing his work. So, he will not find time with his family.
Another point why I advocate that the young people today have to be able to plan and organized their life is the rapid development in the technology. The rapid development of the technology today provides a lot of devices that the young people want to buy. So, the young people should manage their resources in suitable way and do not waste their money buying unimportant things. However, buying unnecessary things will lead to money problem and that has bad impact on the person’s life.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the competitions between young people today are very high. If the young people utilize their time by learning new skill, that will provide long termed benefits to their life. For instance, the person chance to new job will be easier, if he has many skills. Additionally, that will build the person character because he will be more flexible and more practical. However, wasting time without doing good things, will put the person in many troubles.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw a conclusion which says that, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion, and other people opinions, are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78823529412 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47745376599 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1356908799 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314261585035 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977462735006 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964961177502 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172357307578 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120840720151 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.