Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Throughout history, in all civilized societies, the issue of parents' role in juvenile's life engendered copious controversies among people. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that young people can make a better decision about their lives today. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that young people depended too much on their parents today. As far as I am concerned, young people like student are more depended on their parents and it is hard for them to make a great decision. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite reason worth mentioning is that parents did not have enough knowledge in the past and it was very difficult for them to help their juvenile to make a right decision. For instance, my father who is working in a big company always talks about his past and he states that he made all his decision and whose parents did not guide him. it is obvious that he needs their help but they did not have the knowledge to convey it to my father and because of it, he makes all his decision. Also, the number of educated people in the past was low and many people chose their own path for building a better future for themselves and few people have the ability to help them.
The second significant reason supporting my idea is that the technology advanced and enhanced people's lifestyle. Nowadays, the development of the technology happening at a very fast pace and this change have a momentous effect on people's life. Parents are more knowledgeable now and this helps their children to make a right decision in this hectic life since there exist many things to select today. it is true there is much information on the internet or even there are many books that can help young people to make a decision but the amount of this data is high and it is arduous for juvenile just by using this data make their decision. For example, juveniles can look for their dream job today and information on the internet are very helpful today but also asking questions about jobs from a mature person is still crucial and vital for them.
To wrap it up, based on the aforementioned argument, young people are more depended on their parents today. Consequently, it is highly recommended that parent help their children and make sure they make a right decision which can help them to progress in the future life. There is a myriad of other reasons, challenging the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...on and whose parents did not guide him. it is obvious that he needs their help but...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...at the technology advanced and enhanced peoples lifestyle. Nowadays, the development of...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...here exist many things to select today. it is true there is much information on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71621621622 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50169166043 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472972972973 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.9350448345 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.176470588 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1176470588 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474682391391 0.236089414692 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162078432994 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113899744062 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315736534742 0.150856017488 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824542293075 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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