Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resourches. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Air travel is one of the greatest human invention because it help many people movements from one place to another place. On the other hand, it gives a few problems about fuel resources in the world. I believe that both of them have good reasons.
For more than 100 years ago, air transportation was making easy people activities. By air transportation,a society could go to another far area faster than other transportations such as bus and train because there is no traffic jam in sky. Besides, air travel such helicopter give many job vacancies from workers in dugout to workers in airplane such ...
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- Higher education can be funded by several ways such as the following 1 All cost paid by the government 2 All cost paid by the student 3 All cost paid by the government loan which students have to pay back after graduation Please discuss both of the advant 48
- Keeping animals in captivity is cruel There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century How far do you agree or disagree with this option 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 37
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Sentence: Air travel is one of the greatest human invention because it help many people movements from one place to another place.
Suggestion: Air travel is one of the greatest human inventions because it helps many people's movements from one place to another place.
Sentence: Besides, air travel such helicopter give many job vacancies from workers in dugout to workers in airplane such as pilot, co-pilot, and mechanic.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: such as helicopter
Description: The fragment helicopter give many is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: As a result, it possible to decrease jobless in an area.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to it and possible
Sentence: However, air vehicle such airplane could give bad impacts for Earth's living thing.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to vehicle and such
Sentence: If people always rely on airplane, automatically they need avtur, and it create by fossil fuel which it almost finish from this world.
Description: The fragment it create by is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace create with verb, past tense
Sentence: In short, air mount possible to always used by people, but world's scietists should invent alternative fuel that save for the Earth and the inhabitants.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to mount and possible
Sentence: If people always rely on airplane, automatically they need avtur, and it create by fossil fuel which it almost finish from this world.
Error: avtur Suggestion: ?
Sentence: In short, air mount possible to always used by people, but world's scietists should invent alternative fuel that save for the Earth and the inhabitants.
Error: scietists Suggestion: scientists
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2 (read a grammar book)
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 286 350
No. of Characters: 1343 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.112 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.696 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.392 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.067 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.188 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5