Some people support agricultural developments, such as factory farming and scientific creation of fruits and vegetables. Others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since the last few decades, the world population is growing significantly and there is an urgent need to address the increased food demand from the growing population.
One school of thought believes that scientific methodologies need to be used in the agricultural segment to accomplish additional requirement, while the other argues that farming under controlled environment is not needed and such produce is not healthy for human consumption. From my perspective, I believe, using the latest science and technology in agriculture is the need of the hour to address the growing demand.
This type of farming is effective as it can produce more in less time and resource, particularly resource in terms of agricultural land which is slowly reducing due to the encroachment of industries. Moreover, these produces are enriched with minerals and vitamins as they are passed through stringent food quality processes. In addition to this, scientific methods can also be used to counter an unpredictable global climate and can help in maintaining the production rate. Overall, agriculture development is vital to accomplishing the need of the growing population.
The people who do not support factory farming and scientific creation of food and vegetables argue that scientific farming degrade the quality of food as it is not grown naturally. They also say that the land demand could be met by having stringent rules to disallow industrial encroachment. Even if the land is made available, the unpredictable weather cannot be taken care. Even though these counter-arguments are presented, there is no evidence proving excess consumption demand could be met by natural method.
Finally, in my opinion, modern farming using scientific methodology not only meet the need of increasing food demand but also bring a significant effect on the other areas of the economy. With raising production, is possible to prepare a plan to promote exports and cut imports.
In the light of the above discussion, as the number of consumers is increasing, growth in the agricultural domain using various scientific creation is crucial to meet excess food requirement of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34897360704 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11375642192 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.640881211 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147392523993 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481721827871 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579030915565 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718911298051 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334381838716 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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