Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over recent couple of decades. Currently, the trend of planning offspring in late age is gaining prevalence among modern couples. Here, I would like to account for reasons, merits and demerits of this phenomena.
There are manifold reasons behind this happening. First and foremost, modern couples want to secure their financial status before conceiving the child. To demonstrate, they have desire to save money in order to manage living outlays of their upcoming generation. Consequently, they prefer to have child in later age. Moreover, maturity can be a good reason for rearing child in late age as well matured parents can bring up their children in better way.
Numerous advantages of this trend can be mentioned. To embark with, couples can develop great mutual understanding, intimacy and affection with each other by spending quality time if they do not have the responsibilities of up- bringing juveniles. Thus, having children in late age is fruitful for both husband and wife to understand each other’s feeling and desires. Furthermore, planning to become parents in mature age allows them to concentrate on their career. To illustrate, they have ample time to learn new skills and techniques to improve professional life. Eventually, idea to have children in late age is lucrative for career prospective. On the contrast, the thorny side is also there.
Several darker aspects of this happening can be put down. To begin with, couples who have juveniles in later age may encounter the problem of generation gap. To justify, children remain quite younger whereas parents are expect to be older. As a result, they lack the harmonious relations with their own children if they bear children too late. What is more, one who plan children in later age may deprive the privilege of becoming parents. For instance, it is scientifically proven that the chance of having infant is declined after 35 year of age and using more and more contraceptives may lead to infertility. Thence, late baby planning sometimes miss the golden opportunity to become parents.
To recapitulate, making decision about family planning is a matter of concern for modern couples. Undeniably, having child in late age has few merits for both husband and wife. However, negatives outcomes of this phenomena cannot be underestimated. Therefore, it is advice for every couple do not conceive baby too late.
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Essay evaluation report
they have desire to save money
they have desires to save money
in better way.
in a/the better way.
in better ways.
Eventually, idea to have children in late age is lucrative
Eventually, ideas to have children in late age are lucrative
Eventually, an/the idea to have children in late age is lucrative
one who plan children in later age
ones who plan children in later age
it is advice for every couple do not conceive baby too late.
it is advice for every couple not to conceive baby too late.
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flaws:
1. need more compound or complex sentences to make sentences longer. look:
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
2. there is issues on singular/plural, look:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 391 350
No. of Characters: 1980 1500
No. of Different Words: 218 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.447 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.064 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.708 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.038 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.774 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.266 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.453 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.051 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...unt for reasons, merits and demerits of this phenomena. There are manifold reason...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expected'.
Suggestion: expected
...emain quite younger whereas parents are expect to be older. As a result, they lack the...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elations with their own children if they bear children too late. What is more, on...
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Line 9, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd wife. However, negatives outcomes of this phenomena cannot be underestimated. The...
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Line 9, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y couple do not conceive baby too late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25831202046 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84924719669 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585677749361 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4216802467 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0384615385 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57692307692 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178288568238 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450939393799 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496160781149 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873581177626 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667027968185 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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