Should students are allowed to choose their subject?
Some people think it is important for students to study and complete university courses no matter they like. On the other hand, others believe that students don't have to attend university courses if those courses are considered not useful in their future. Two conflict opinions are given, and they have a advantage and a disadvantage.
First of all, one of the advantages of studying in university is this enables students to have enough knowledge on their major. I believe they are ready to go in to the society. On the other hand, the most disadvantage of studying in university even it is considered not useful in their future is it can be waste of their time studying in university. Moreover, plenty of students are applying university as their parents pressure to graduate school. However, as it depends in what they study, this must have considered by them. A lot of jobs require experience rather than studying major.
Second of all, in my opinion, i believe that even it is depends on what they study, students have ti complete the courses in university. Moreover, some think university is only for studying their major. But actually it can also enables students to strengthen their possibility to make friend. I believe students still have to go to the university before get into the society.
In conclusion, they are pros and cons studying in university and getting in to society first. For the advantage, they gain enough time to study on the major, and for the disadvantage, some could be waste of time. Considering those reasons, I would encourage students to study at university before they get in yo society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: enable
...g their major. But actually it can also enables students to strengthen their possibilit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7455904002 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445652173913 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3046412107 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138907737597 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589326907287 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535307668648 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104131362133 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490574257815 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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