Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city. Advantage or disadvantage for young people.
Young adults tend to relocate from their houses and travel to different cities in search of employment or education. While relocating from home to a different place for education or job has disadvantages, my view is that the advantages of leaving home at the young age outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will discuss why young people should leave their home and pursue their dream.
Students often come out of their comfort zone and travel for education and employment. These young people tend to be more responsible because of their attitude towards their dream and they took one step in achieving their dream by coming out of their safe zone. For instance, nearly 2/3 students in the Canadian universities are from various countries and these students travel half the way across the world to accomplish their goal. As a result of leaving their home, these students tend to live their own life without relying on anyone.
Students who leave their home at an earlier age for employment will be more responsible, independent, innovative and better samaritans. Travelling assist them in experiencing a new language, culture, cuisine and assist them in meeting a diverse set of like-minded people. Additionally, they have better chances for top-level management of multinational companies due to their experience gained in their previous job or degree. For example, a majority of the "Software Engineers" in Silicon Valley are either from India or China.
Relocation to a different city for employment or education has increased rapidly among young people. In my opinion, budding adults must leave their home for the betterment of their career and achieve their goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Valley) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...tware Engineers' in Silicon Valley are either from India or China. Relocat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2750929368 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89449550482 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557620817844 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4042171065 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203304180769 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886216461506 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689512124872 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15173946946 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666325172772 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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