Law can change people's behaviour. do you agree or not?
In modern societies, the law takes centre stage. Many people claim that law can affect citizen's behaviour, as well. As far as I am concerned, I am convinced that law can influence the adult's manner by compelling them to obey rules and preventing them from illegal discriminations.
To begin with, one of the major issues in modern societies is to compel people to obey legislation in order to manage the society and prevent violation and crime. Applying strict legislation on the public seems to be the most solid approach to solve this issue. Therefore, laws inevitably play a critical role in citizen's lives and behaviour. As it clearly proves legislations by obliging ordinary people to obey and acting as a deterrent against crimes alter people's manner and actually influence people to be law-abiding.
Moreover, the law can prevent illegal discrimination such as racial bias or gender bias. For example, having a clear law about employment can prevent employers from applying gender discrimination in organizations. Consequently, this legislation makes employers to obey the equality law in their companies. As it is clear, having restrictive rules results in alter people's behaviour.
As a conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that law can influence people's behaviour in order to manage social issues such as discriminations and crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...am convinced that law can influence the adults manner by compelling them to obey rules...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33644859813 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10662977709 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0482527051 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267953403977 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112418399082 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743231090101 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184206086946 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267049425618 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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