In recent years many countries have witnessed a dramatic increase in gun shooting in crime scenes. Likewise, some people who believe that this may have roots in the fact that many ordinary people have the gun at home, I am firmly convinced that it occurs owing to increase in crime rate and lack of having strict laws against being armed with a gun.
To begin with, the fact that ordinary people have the right to have a gun at home contributes to the crime rate. Statistics from 2000 to 2018 clearly reveal that crime rate particularly armed crime has had a major increase after citizen change their idea to protect themselves using guns. This clearly shows that, in many countries using guns by the public results in a growth in the number of shooting and crimes.
Moreover, in many developed countries, there is no strict legislation against carrying on a gun which can lead to experimenting more armed crime, particularly among the public. For example, in the recent couple of decades police reports firmly reveal that even minor crime which are not very serious such as burglary, criminals were armed. As a result, the government seems can act as a deterrent by legislating some strict laws which deteriorate having the gun.
As a conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that the increasing number of shooting in crime scene has roots in the fact that ordinary people have guns at their home and also lack of having any laws to ban having a gun for the public.
- Children should only play sports for fun not in competitions or contest. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology. 77
- In many countries using guns is on the increase. what are the reason? 55
- Children should only play sports for fun not in competitions or contest To what extent do you agree or disagree 83
- In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 55
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.734375 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46810711566 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51953125 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9216670345 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255532329817 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125108436763 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813535724363 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184236017588 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719419479224 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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