Independent essay
Events happened in the past is one of the main factor responsible for existence of human beings on the earth.
Advancement in science and technology allows us to have knowledge of past. Although some people think that
studying about ancient time is useless, but in my opinion it is exceptionally important, for the following reasons:
Economically, We live in ever changing world, it is necessary to know about important discovery.
about contribution. To create latest complex machinery principle of resiance and conductivity acts as pillar;
which were formulated few sanctuary before.So, it is compulsory for electronic engineers to knows
pins and bolts of old formulae.Top successful corporations are not going to hire person who
doesnt possess knowledge of physics.
Academically, when we analyse our formal education system; history is mandatory subject
in schools everywhere. Students are required to learn ancient civilization life style, eating habits
and their art work, in orer to develop critical thinking. History acts as gateway for many people
who are curious in joinig archeology field and research. Scientific perspective, phenomenon of Global warming was predicted by scientists several years back. This process happened due to mutiple reasons such as destruction of ozone layer,
adding pollution to the atmosphere. By knowing this,preventive techniques are incorporated such as equipped machine in vehicles to reduce smoke, modified design of air conditoners ad refergerator to reduce adding of free radicles in at atmosphere.
Astronomically, Astronomers are keen in gathering information about the past to know process how earth came
into existence. They have collected data from the research done to understand big band theory
is the model which explains the phenomenon of expansion of universe from high density and
high temprature states stand changes happened when earth's atmosphere was created.
So old studies teaches us the evolution of earth.
In summarising, it is worth saying that we cant imagine our life without historical backgorund. Learning about past provide tremendous positive outcomes and sets a stage for the success.
No sphere of human life can be flourished with ignorance. Therefore, there is stringent need to emphaize study of past for students irrespective of field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ion system; history is mandatory subject in schools everywhere. Students are requ...
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... the past to know process how earth came into existence. They have collected data...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6657223796 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08694012503 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668555240793 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9294409761 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.647058824 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.01818996416 130% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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