The graph below show annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in some country.
The bar graph illustrates annual water utilization by seven industries for the ground water and public supply. The value of water is measured in millions of cubic meters (mils.m3).
Overall, it can be seen that ground water generally is spent the most in five industries (fuel, metal, chemicals and papers) . On the whole, the number of ground water surpasses the number of water which people use for their essentials.
In terms of usage ground water is dominant in many part of industries. In chemical and metal industries spend 430 and 240 mils.m3 water. for this sphere. Followed by this, there are lower number of ground water in fuels and textiles that are 70 and 80 mils.m3 water.
In contrast, a significant portion of water in two industries which comprise food/drink and machinery is delivered to society that are 190 and 100, respectively. In addition, ground water is less used in machinery filed is 10 mils.m3 while public supply is the lowest rate in fuels, paper and textiles that are 10, 20 and 10 mils.m3.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...stries fuel, metal, chemicals and papers . On the whole, the number of ground wate...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
...ms of usage ground water is dominant in many part of industries. In chemical and metal in...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...stries spend 430 and 240 mils.m3 water. for this sphere. Followed by this, there ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition, in contrast, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87356321839 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56347977785 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6435885654 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230097646425 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106499105155 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781182878348 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165914699299 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110889646474 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.