You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Estimable Manager,
I wanted to express my appreciation for the immaculate arrangements and superior service received at your magnificent hotel on my aunt 90th birthday.
The place was less noisy and melodious music with dim lights ambiance made the atmosphere warm and cozy. Since the event was attended by most of the elderly people, they loved such calmly environment. The waiters were professional particularly Mr. John have been impassioned and cooperative sorting out much and take care of our requirements.
The party was thrown so that aunt childhood companions got a chance to see one another. They were continuously discussing those times from claiming their youth, as they use to meet every day.
The quality and presentation of the food provided was remarkably committed and everyone feel gratified. Similarly the beverages served to lodging at the right temperature to expend for full delight. Although the deck was bit uneven which I noticed but it was ignorable.
Please accept my gratitude, and extend my regards to your staff for extraordinary work.
Yours Faithfully,
Ali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lights'' or 'light's'?
Suggestion: lights'; light's
...less noisy and melodious music with dim lights ambiance made the atmosphere warm and c...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...imes from claiming their youth, as they use to meet every day. The quality and p...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r youth, as they use to meet every day. The quality and presentation of the food...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... committed and everyone feel gratified. Similarly the beverages served to lodging at the ...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...for full delight. Although the deck was bit uneven which I noticed but it was ignor...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n which I noticed but it was ignorable. Please accept my gratitude, and extend m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36994219653 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96391475438 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.757225433526 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4223630162 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18453493829 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552210795688 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439223473214 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791523451563 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028171478727 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.