Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Education is crucial as much as oxygen. It is the ever bending anchor which inculcates the innovations among the human. Now a day, education is considered to be a mere business, while that’s not the cardinal purpose of the education. Education is pivotal as it is the right of every human being in the world.
Firstly, in order to diminish the destitute in the world, education is the only hope. By making the education free, the possibility of the poor being a rich is irrefutable. In most of the developing countries like India, free schooling schemes had been implemented by the government. It is accolade with inundate responses. In the southern part of India, the legends like kamarajar, besides providing the free schooling, offered free lunches in the school. If such free schooling scheme would instigate and bolster the education standard of the society and so do the free university education. Most of the destitute, especially in India, gave up education after schooling. The economic status of the poor people thwarts the aim of the poor, cerebral students and plunge their potential down. While schooling Is the period when, we could dream limitlessly, the university education is the phase where we could color each and every one of our ebullient dreams and so do the free education on college and university is indispensible, especially for the poor people.
Additionally, the poor people copiously know about the hard work and those are the ones who are indefatigable on each and every situation. It’s not only them, who would be benefited but also their successive generations. The education for the poor people not only changes their fate but also their young one’. Advanced of the technology would also be in its zenith if they are gifted with such opportunities .With their arduous work, they would definitely bolster the economic status of the country. They would bring glory to their country through their extant. The great exemplification is Dr.APJ Abdul kalam. We are proud to be Tamilian because of such a connoisseur leader. He is not only a president but a protean, who shook the entire world with his talents in the field of science, teaching, being great soul. Writing about him, always brings tear in eyes and fire in soul for each and every Indian. After schooling, he was in great dilemma of taking the college education because of the financial status of the family. It was his sister who buttressed him and sold her jewel for his education. If her sister was not magnanimous, then we would lost a great soul in the society .There are great souls out there struggling for their education. Those could be raised to the zenith, only when the government, act forward to implement this system of free college education scheme.
Finally, since majority of the countries in the world are democratic, we people could only put forward our vision and wish for it. It is the sole responsibility of the government to make this act under implementation to brighten the life of the poor souls out there.
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- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free. 75
- Some people believe that competition for high grades motivates students to excel in the classroom. Others believe that such competition seriously limits the quality of real learning.Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with 16
- Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9453125 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77103769414 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4765625 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 795.6 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3885373206 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16995668376 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467310498903 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577400552297 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100210471877 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813140043395 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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