Memorandum from the management to restore weather and local news time to its previous state does not clearly define the reasons. Complaints from viewers and cancellation of advertising contracts seem to be an effect of reduction in weather and local time but conclusions cannot be drawn.
Viewer complaints about the weather and local news could be due to different reasons. The viewers could have complained about the content instead of the coverage time. Complaints can be due to other factors like anchors, other programmes that are telecasted at the same time. Enough data proof should be provided to take a decision. Polls and viewer suggestions can be used to bring back the viewers attention and placate them.
Local businesses could have canceled their advertising contracts due to a reduction in the local news time. But it cannot be concluded directly, local businesses could cancel their contracts due to several factors like a drop in revenue, closed out their business, might have shifted to online advertising on social platforms. They could have been worried about the time of news program or duration of advertisement telecasted. Discussions should be made with local businesses and the reason for contract cancelation must be found out.
Reason to reduce the weather and local news time must be considered before reinstating back it to the older level. Change in weather and local news time might be due to customer complaints and going back to same old strategy might frustrate them. A deeper analysis should be made before restoring the time back to the former state.
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This is not an argument essay
This is not an argument essay, but an issue essay.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
...ggestions can be used to bring back the viewers attention and placate them. Local bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67443574428 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 204.123752495 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490347490347 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9150500515 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 5.70786347227 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0354724191015 0.218282227539 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0179743362278 0.0743258471296 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0184045227929 0.0701772020484 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0252283666767 0.128457276422 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00441891539704 0.0628817314937 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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