artificially intelligent robots are increasingly taking human jobs. Some people believe that eventually all work will be done by robots while others believe that there will be a limit to the tasks that robots can perform.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading
Artificially intelligent robots are overtaking the human employment sectors. While some people think that all sort of work and tasks will be performed by robots, others maintain that tasks of specialist nature can only be carried out by humans. This essay will discuss why eventually robots will be able to undertake all kind of jobs and put an end to the requirement of humans.
Firstly, there is quite a likelihood that artificial robots will dominate in all work spheres and subsequently eliminate the presence of humans. An exponential advancement in artificial technology has led to the development of extremely intelligent robots. For instance, use of artificial robots in the field of medicine instead of nurses will prove to be more accurate and caring for the patients. As a result of this, there exists no evident reason that why computers will not replace humans in every walk of life.
On the other hand, it is considered that a few jobs would still entail the requirement of humans. These people are totally unaware of the fact at which the computers are advancing. Therefore, it is just a matter of time when the computers and robots would completely rule the job sectors. Needless to say that all working arena will be under the control of artificial robots rather than humans.
To conclude, artificially intelligent robots are dominating the employment area in a rapid manner. In my opinion, it is just a matter of time before robots completely replace the human race in all job sectors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rapid manner" with adverb for "rapid"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...bots are dominating the employment area in a rapid manner. In my opinion, it is just a matter of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, sort of, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0119047619 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80201163655 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7654082096 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.1538461538 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418410734765 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145697178687 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087363085289 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263011947508 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102014472411 0.0609392437508 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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