An informal letter
Dear Raj
I am writing this letter you to inform that I have currently join new job at The Himalayan Times as a Corporate Reporter.
I was fed up with that hectic schedule in my previews job at Nabil Bank Limited. You know that I cannot stay without doing something new in my working style. However, I the banking sector we must follow the rule they have made which make me monotonous every time during my working tenure.
This new job is interesting to me. As you know that I love to make wide range of relationship with multiple sectors of people from the world. I will be assigned the responsibility to conduct corporate interviews with different sector’s business leaders and collect relevance information from them regarding to the business, markets, new coming and possible market threats. These works will be very much fruitful me to developed my knowledge in corporate sector and make a good relationship.
One more information that I have to give you is that I am coming next month in Canada for 2 weeks which will be more exiting there with you.
Yours
Sudan Kumar oli
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- Task 1General training test 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'joined'.
Suggestion: joined
...ter you to inform that I have currently join new job at The Himalayan Times as a Cor...
^^^^
Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e. This new job is interesting to me. As you know that I love to make wide range...
^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ore information that I have to give you is that I am coming next month in Canada f...
^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat I am coming next month in Canada for 2 weeks which will be more exiting there...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75263157895 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71003572464 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.436573714 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0845440819414 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302311144013 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05400186292 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712882569252 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692414308632 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.