The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

The given pie charts present the status of energy production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
Overall, it can be observed that the development of electricity from different sources in Australia and France has been compared in 2000 with the status of electricity production in 1980 by them.
In the first two pie charts are presenting units of electricity produced by different source such as coal, oil, natural gas, hydro power and nuclear power in Australia in 1980 and 2000 respectively. In 1980, total electricity production was 100 units only. Out of total electricity 50 units was produced from coal. Least contribution of electricity in 1980 was oil. Similarly, natural gas and hydro power electricity was equal of 20 units each. However, the major contributions of electricity was coal i.e. 130 units out of 170 units in 2000. Second highest contribution of power was hydro power which was 38 units and rest of 4 units was contributed by oil and natural gas in Australia.
The second two pie charts show the contribution on electricity by different source of fuel in France. Only 90 units of electricity were produced in 1980. Out of total 50 units was produced from coal and natural gas equally. Similarly, 20 units produced by oil, 15 units produced from Nuclear power and remaining from hydro power. However, the major source of electricity in France was nuclear power which contributes 126 units out of 180 units of electricity. Oil and coal were second major source of electricity in France. The electricity contribution of natural gas and hydro power was only 2 units each.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, similarly, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9594095941 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82838379738 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.365313653137 0.547539520022 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7354826694 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411547502049 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188885906293 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126130739362 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351209891966 0.15604864568 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105948252433 0.0819641961636 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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