the autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders;if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked,both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrant pose such threats every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.
The author concludes in the argument that because immigrants pose threats of economy and national identity ,illegal immigrants should be returned to the country of their origin.There are serious flaws in this argument.
Firstly, there is a causal relationship between autonomy of any country and strength of its borders.Author fails to provide any such data which make the author to make a relationship with both of them.After this,author also provides a causal relationship between strength of country's borders and entry of illegal immigrants in the country. Author fails to provide any evidences of this analogy between tight security on borders and entry of illegal immigrants.As there are many such cases in which illegal immigrants don't even use the borders to migrate into country.
In addition, author also lacks in evidences for the direct comparison between economy,national identity and illegal immigrants coming to the country. Author assumed this relationship without any support that illegal immigrants will deteriorate the economy of country and national identity will be in danger.
In sum, reasoning of author is very inadequate and the causal relationship provided by author at various parts of argument is lacking evidences and support. Author needs to improve the argument, by providing various evidences and proofs that supports his/her argument. Also,author needs to provide accurate data of how the illegal immigrants had affected economy of country to strengthen the argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...threats of economy and national identity ,illegal immigrants should be returned to...
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Suggestion: There
...returned to the country of their origin.There are serious flaws in this argument. Fi...
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Suggestion: Author
...any country and strength of its borders.Author fails to provide any such data which ma...
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Suggestion: After
...o make a relationship with both of them.After this,author also provides a causal rela...
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Suggestion: , author
...elationship with both of them.After this,author also provides a causal relationship bet...
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Suggestion: As
...borders and entry of illegal immigrants.As there are many such cases in which ille...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...borders and entry of illegal immigrants.As there are many such cases in which ille...
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Suggestion: don't
... such cases in which illegal immigrants dont even use the borders to migrate into c...
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Suggestion:
...ich illegal immigrants dont even use the borders to migrate into country. In add...
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Suggestion: , national
...or the direct comparison between economy,national identity and illegal immigrants coming ...
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Suggestion: , author
...ofs that supports his/her argument. Also,author needs to provide accurate data of how t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 2260.96107784 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 441.139720559 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60087719298 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96619340639 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 204.123752495 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469298245614 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7818108223 57.8364921388 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.625 119.503703932 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 23.324526521 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.70786347227 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295790558244 0.218282227539 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151314604336 0.0743258471296 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1051204999 0.0701772020484 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213864065755 0.128457276422 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880108772958 0.0628817314937 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.3799401198 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.3550499002 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.197005988 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.5979740519 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 98.500998004 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 12.3882235529 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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