The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The follwing argument is flawed for numerous reasons. Primarily, the argument is based on the unwarranted assumption that, excessive number of mopeds are the main reason of accidents with pedestrians, rendering its main conclusion, limiting the number of mopeds rented by the island's rental companies would reduce the number of accidents, invalid.
The argument fails to provide any justification that limiting the number of mopeds rented would reduce the frequency of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians. These accidents could have been casued by the impudent (imprudent !!!) pedestrians who intercept the path that mopeds are crossing. The argument could have been stronger had it provided information regarding, why pedestrians should not be blamed for these accidents.
The argument also leaves another unwarranted question. It is implied from the argument that since Seaville's town council enforced limits on the number of moped rentals, in Balmer Island the same percentage of reduction in the accidents involving pedestrians and mopeds would happen if the town council imposes the same limitations on mopeds. However, the circumstances in Searville could have been different from Barmal's. In Searville's town council may have imposed other limitations on the pedestrians as well, such as prohibiting pedestrians to cross the areas where mopeds are probable to cross. Therefore this limits on pedestrians have reduced the number ofm accidents in Searville.
Moreover, limiting the number of mopeds rented by the companies from 50 to 25 per day during the summer may still be excessive compared to the total population of Balmar Island. Since in Balmar mopeds are the main form of transportation, numerous companies would rent (lend !!!) mopeds to people of Balmar. Therefore, even renting 25 mopeds per day during the summer by each company would not reduce the total number of mopeds on streets of Balmar in compared to human population in that island.
Because the argument makes several unwarranted assumptions it fails to make a convincing case that limiting the number of mopeds would reduce the number of accidents between people and mopeds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The follwing argument is flawed for nume...
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...e the number of accidents, invalid. The argument fails to provide any justif...
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...en casued by the impudent imprudent !!! pedestrians who intercept the path that mopeds are ...
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... not be blamed for these accidents. The argument also leaves another unwarra...
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...eas where mopeds are probable to cross. Therefore this limits on pedestrians have reduced...
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... number ofm accidents in Searville. Moreover, limiting the number of mopeds ...
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Suggestion: Mopeds
... numerous companies would rent lend !!! mopeds to people of Balmar. Therefore, even re...
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...to human population in that island. Because the argument makes several unwar...
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...of accidents between people and mopeds.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.29781420765 0.25644967241 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.161202185792 0.15541462614 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0710382513661 0.0836205057962 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0245901639344 0.0520304965353 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0109289617486 0.0272364105082 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147540983607 0.125424944231 118% => OK
Participles: 0.068306010929 0.0416121511921 164% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82049914368 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218579234973 0.026700313972 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114754098361 0.113004496875 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327868852459 0.0255425247493 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136612021858 0.0127820249294 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2198.0 2731.13054187 80% => OK
No of words: 336.0 446.07635468 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.54166666667 6.12365571057 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.57801047555 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.464285714286 0.378187486979 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309523809524 0.287650121315 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.247023809524 0.208842608468 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169642857143 0.135150697306 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82049914368 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 207.018472906 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46130952381 0.469332199767 98% => OK
Word variations: 46.5851371051 52.1807786196 89% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.039408867 80% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.2022227129 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6184014142 57.7814097925 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.375 141.986410481 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.2022227129 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.724660767414 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.58251231527 251% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.9523809524 51.9672348444 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.61111111111 1.8405768891 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.619493367995 0.441005458295 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143030440525 0.135418324435 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111323248284 0.0829849096947 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.62345738831 0.58762219726 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19843294672 0.147661913831 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273734301003 0.193483328276 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140180231629 0.0970749176394 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.456343213314 0.42659136922 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0420159885873 0.0774707102158 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.443319805424 0.312017818177 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603466511949 0.0698173142475 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.87684729064 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 5.36822660099 149% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 14.657635468 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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