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e-rater score report
flaws:
No. of Words: 228 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 228 350
No. of Characters: 1168 1500
No. of Different Words: 102 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.886 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.123 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.077 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.954 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.422 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 441.139720559 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32456140351 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16486499264 2.78398813304 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 204.123752495 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486842105263 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 705.55239521 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5922876578 57.8364921388 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.70786347227 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969861635894 0.218282227539 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385438946108 0.0743258471296 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508972580364 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05994181787 0.128457276422 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526504148382 0.0628817314937 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 98.500998004 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.