Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modernized and the sophisticated world where we live, everything in the world related to each other so subtle, so I think that we should be aware what happen all around the world even though some people think it is just the waste of time. The reason to substituted my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
First, we can learn lots of life experience from the event that were happened to others. When you want to start to do a new thing, you don't know what is the outcome, but you can use other ways of thinking and the experience to avoid losing of time and energy. For instance, when I want to choose my master thesis, I read lots of article from the internet. I got valuable lessons from them and then tried to continue and improve their ways. As you can see, if I don't be aware whats happen in the science world which I am serious about it, I never be able to done any valuable work.
Second, when you be aware about the news from all around the world, you can see the problems that people faced. Therefore, you can think to a solution to prevent them. I never can forget the time that I turned the TV after some hour of the new year. I heard that lots of accident were happened in the worldwide which means a huge number of the mortality. I decide to study it's root in my own country. I recognize that my own country have one of the highest rate of the mortality in the roads. After that, I study more about the road ways safety. Finally, I and one of my professors in the university would be able to design and prefer new guard rail model which show better performance in the computer simulation and now is in the experiment process. This experiment taught me that how taking care to a simple new change the way of my focus in my studies with my professors in the university and probably will change the lots of people lives, time will tell.
Third, from other perspective, you can precipitate what will happen next in your country, based on the news that you hear from the other countries because they will effect the political relationship. For instance, my parent want to buy a better house, but the have struggle in their choose. After some days, they want to buy another car to my mom and postponing house buying to the next year. However, my uncle call my mom and said that Trump want to took new sanction to our country, so he believed that this will improve in the price of the house. Consequently, my parent buy one of the houses which is smaller than what we want, but in a very good location. As what my uncle said, the price of the house were improved and I am sure that we never be able to buy house, if we didn't buy on that time. As you can see how a being aware about the news make our life condition better.
In sum, taking aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I believe that we all should be aware what in happen in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 542.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32841328413 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33170333811 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450184501845 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.867611777 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146781330909 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425664111856 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444948684437 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934568925896 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129705557883 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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